tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post7297106113112226873..comments2024-01-31T20:28:51.918-05:00Comments on Loud Silence: Surgeon Generals WarningKayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17353317664100788614noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-10104970912951419452010-12-31T17:14:15.145-05:002010-12-31T17:14:15.145-05:00Just dropped by to wish you all the best in the co...Just dropped by to wish you all the best in the coming new year-Kay dear!<br />;)<br />:)))Dulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-74611847064029290232010-12-31T07:04:50.015-05:002010-12-31T07:04:50.015-05:00hmmm....see now you have me curious...flip side......hmmm....see now you have me curious...flip side...hmm...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-89523516519182411352010-12-31T06:36:06.186-05:002010-12-31T06:36:06.186-05:00smokin' the fragments of broken hearts - wow -...smokin' the fragments of broken hearts - wow - tough and powerful images in this one<br />happy new year to you kayClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-83136308724403051172010-12-30T16:48:58.980-05:002010-12-30T16:48:58.980-05:00Kay,
i would like to wish you a very happy new yea...Kay,<br />i would like to wish you a very happy new year for the 2011!<br /><br />i want you to know how grateful i'm to you for many your visits, your meaningful presence, and for your friendship.<br /><br />Your words have gently placed their understanding touch during my tormented hours, and in their warmth i've found shelter.<br /><br />The year is ending and you've offered me so much!<br />i just wanted to acknowlege this!<br /><br />Thanks a lot Kay!<br />colCraftsman of lighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14747434398075620991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-61955540309315370392010-12-30T16:33:58.159-05:002010-12-30T16:33:58.159-05:00Kay,
i hope this is only a poem....but you shed li...Kay,<br />i hope this is only a poem....but you shed light 'on all that gone up in the smoke'.<br /><br />Freeing oneself of the distastefulness.<br /><br />i don't smoke, and i guess i don't have to smoke to know what all this is about.Craftsman of lighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14747434398075620991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-42656170065665344632010-12-29T12:25:54.801-05:002010-12-29T12:25:54.801-05:00An another awesome work Kay :)An another awesome work Kay :)Harinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14027026610825955425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-52261209994609298312010-12-29T05:46:57.905-05:002010-12-29T05:46:57.905-05:00A compelling image that builds with every line. Ve...A compelling image that builds with every line. Very powerful.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-21830230230480848892010-12-29T04:16:42.414-05:002010-12-29T04:16:42.414-05:00I don't know anyone who can express feelings a...I don't know anyone who can express feelings as you do, you are like the celebrity with one name...Cher, Oprah - I know it is them when they sing or speak the first line just as I would know which poem was yours as soon as I read it.....love all that you write!<br />.....:-) HusBerniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03024565921761129108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-32740750416341912622010-12-28T22:58:50.352-05:002010-12-28T22:58:50.352-05:00Wow..loved the way you have used the comparison ov...Wow..loved the way you have used the comparison over here..<br />How difficult it may sound all through but the last two lines give out the final piece of "Peace"Alcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-8421371333771553202010-12-28T20:57:51.197-05:002010-12-28T20:57:51.197-05:00Wonderfully pulled together, from warning on throu...Wonderfully pulled together, from warning on through. The image is great.Anthony Ducehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17476865809734682418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-74104307434079337142010-12-28T20:29:18.232-05:002010-12-28T20:29:18.232-05:00I love it. You have such a great mind. I finally p...I love it. You have such a great mind. I finally posted on if you want to read it. It's more written as a metal song but you might like it. Later.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-46039532026006513552010-12-28T19:14:26.294-05:002010-12-28T19:14:26.294-05:00fumes of unanswered promises
wafting out of longin...fumes of unanswered promises<br />wafting out of longing lips<br />left in disrepair,<br /><br />every word touched a beat in me..WOW KAY..i love reading you!<br />:)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-23888113870110136532010-12-28T16:45:58.843-05:002010-12-28T16:45:58.843-05:00Smoking's bad for you; take up chewing instead...Smoking's bad for you; take up chewing instead! (LOL!)<br /><br />I like the metaphore - you played it well.Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-14643320660209575662010-12-28T16:03:14.436-05:002010-12-28T16:03:14.436-05:00This line, "fumes of unanswered promises"...This line, "fumes of unanswered promises", and the whole poem, makes you think twice about smoking! Great poem.<br /><br />Hope you had a great Christmas. wbWarren Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17956713921509659993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-61553930996118992952010-12-28T15:28:31.474-05:002010-12-28T15:28:31.474-05:00WOW
Another great piece Kay
Lovely piece
life, lik...WOW<br />Another great piece Kay<br />Lovely piece<br />life, like smoke, ashes, cremation...uffff<br />I need a cig and read it againDulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-63718605585365759292010-12-28T11:54:31.327-05:002010-12-28T11:54:31.327-05:00I like the metaphor. I smoke an occasional cigar. ...I like the metaphor. I smoke an occasional cigar. It's like coffee...I don't really care much for the taste but I like the ritual and the way it makes me slow down and sit a spell. But the morning after I smoke a stogie my mouth tastes like I licked the floor of a bar. It's bad...the aftertaste. "Fumes of unanswered promises wafting out of longing lips". I wish it tasted better. So wishing.Wine and Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06778785233226804217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-3925941551665852852010-12-28T11:01:09.060-05:002010-12-28T11:01:09.060-05:00amazing metaphor for life here...so sad at the sam...amazing metaphor for life here...so sad at the same time. I know this pain, girl.Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17770013944671340961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-43616876255021148872010-12-28T09:22:06.244-05:002010-12-28T09:22:06.244-05:00Amazing imagery, Kay. I could see the smoke waftin...Amazing imagery, Kay. I could see the smoke wafting in the stale air. You're amazing!! Love & Blessings, my poet-friend! xoxoMarionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14786883679294446945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-33754044511481331212010-12-28T08:52:32.491-05:002010-12-28T08:52:32.491-05:00ah, memories...they are the difficult part.ah, memories...they are the difficult part.Anu Lalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08348837368680298553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-38243905827006088762010-12-28T07:20:28.555-05:002010-12-28T07:20:28.555-05:00So...was this metaphor mentholated?So...was this metaphor mentholated?Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-18975801418734142712010-12-28T06:47:26.559-05:002010-12-28T06:47:26.559-05:00toght write kay...yeaj i feel this onetoght write kay...yeaj i feel this oneBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-71983490876423683662010-12-28T04:22:41.235-05:002010-12-28T04:22:41.235-05:00i think this was just what i was looking for... i ...i think this was just what i was looking for... i need to share it, yes i do!!<br /><br />great stuff as always!ererhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680330275107474948noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-66278718120125612412010-12-28T03:40:12.458-05:002010-12-28T03:40:12.458-05:00oh...so much pain in your words...oh...so much pain in your words...Beyond Horizonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14670805648928048491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-15664566457760141692010-12-28T02:46:06.942-05:002010-12-28T02:46:06.942-05:00oh kay, you've touched my heart...oh kay, you've touched my heart...Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6144550196864745497.post-53180809468649456382010-12-28T01:05:55.783-05:002010-12-28T01:05:55.783-05:00metaphorical....wonderfully envisioned...relations...metaphorical....wonderfully envisioned...relationships, der memories and the much undesired aftermath...the soul continues to be charred until all that is left is ashes and smoke...<br /><br />luvd it! tc! :)Maverickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442002151797497705noreply@blogger.com