i wished upon forever
through the star-studded
gaze in your eyes
with a mirrored reflection of
hope lust entrust
arising into remembrance
the beauty lying within forgiveness
unbeknownst how much would be taken
between the fingers of our touch
grasping the breath
of which we both subside
this moment,
as much yours
as it is mine
tickles my girlish emotions
endearing the ever-lasting blush
staking claim
into womanhood
both
to be
loved & despised
I wrote something along the same lines a few years ago... "love & despised" at the same time... interesting!
ReplyDeletesometimes I fail to understand the silent emotions.. while reading this I remembered of those sometimes..
ReplyDeleteOh, this is so very true. Ypour line about the silent emotions reminds me strongly on my fav quote: if you dont understand ym silence, you wont understand my words.
ReplyDeleteLove to you!
Fragrance of lust and love intertwined between the lines…
ReplyDeleteif despised then i would wonder at the authenticity of the love...lust perhaps but...nice contradiction kay..
ReplyDeleteoh wow, kay, this is GREAT! the light and the dark of love. always intertwined. and thank you for your friendship, love and hugs!!!
ReplyDeletekinda captures the circle...
ReplyDeletelove it, just beautiful...and conjures memories of a few youthful relationships :)
ReplyDeleteI would have changed the order of the last part thusly:
ReplyDeleteTo be
both
loved & despised
Otherwise it sounds like you're talking about two people being loved and despised.
(But hey, that's just my opinion!)
Nice piece!
I don't want to lose the girlish blush. Rarely seen but much appreciated. Wish that it could remain, when the fingers have taken more than their share.
ReplyDeletei wished upon forever
ReplyDeletethrough the star-studded
gaze in your eyes
those line kay, took me..and yes,i still blush like teenager..somehow love never fades in me..i loved this one so much! AMAZING! ;)
amazing write... expressed so brillaintly... touching...
ReplyDeletebetween the fingers of our touch,
ReplyDeleteyeah, Kay... delicate smoothing, i feel chills on my skin
passionate experience!
thanks and greetings
*both
ReplyDeleteto be
loved & despised*.
Well this is pure yin yang... as everything else in this life... but love-oh, love is somehow too special to...just accept it.
Great poem, dear Kay
;)
Kay you are so improving an already wonderful gift of writing poetry. Not only love this but have lived it.......:-) Hugs
ReplyDeleteGreat pic.. so powerful and keep writing it is wonderful. Carla
ReplyDeleteYou write beautifully !
ReplyDeletegaurav...
loved & despised
ReplyDeleteweird connection
Your poems are like books you open and get lost in, beautiful page once again!
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness that's beautiful. *sigh*
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ReplyDeleteKay,
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by my blog.
This is a beautiful poem and I love the picture.
PG
both - loved and despised - what a power sentence - but he would be an idiot to despise you...
ReplyDeletenice and lovely words--i appreciate this.
ReplyDeleteBest Wishes.
Hemant
http://childrensheaven.blogspot.com
you are funny yourself Kay, yeah passion does seem to be strong between those who feeling for each each are fluid and both love and to despise or forces felt thatt come and go like the tide.
ReplyDeletemaybe that is the only way it can happen, It is nice to dream though that there can passion that is feroricious but not dispicable :) unless kay has been a very bad girl and thats her kink
Despised? Poppycock. ;-)
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