Friday, June 26, 2009

Thunck Thunck

Thunck thunck
Heels beat the cement
Walking forward
Observing eyes
Shaded rims
Watching nothing
Seeing everything
Life surfaces from within
Forward movement
Thunck thunck
Destination:
Distraction
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10 comments:

  1. OpaqueJune 27, 2009 at 2:44 AM

    Very unusual manner of expressing! I liked it! It appears so simple but I know it isn't! Good job! Keep writing!!!

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  2. ShadowJune 27, 2009 at 5:21 AM

    ha! excellent. love that little tattoo...

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  3. NancyJune 27, 2009 at 11:52 AM

    Those are really cute shoes! Oh, and I liked the poetry, too. :-)

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  4. AnonymousJune 27, 2009 at 12:51 PM

    Hey your back!

    Wonderful as always!

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  5. JosephineJune 27, 2009 at 2:22 PM

    Love the simplicity; a lot can be said between the lines...
    -Alex

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  6. AnonymousJune 28, 2009 at 8:29 AM

    Welcome back!! we missed you. Love the shoes ha ha ha.. On a serious note, loved the write. Isn't it funny, but, true how at times in our lives when we really feel deep inside, we find things when we are not looking for them. Life's distractions

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  7. PaulaJune 28, 2009 at 10:58 AM

    Good to have you back. Thought of you. Poem wonderful with a lot between the lines. Hugs across the pond

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  8. One Prayer GirlJune 28, 2009 at 3:36 PM

    Loved the simplicity of your writing here. Simple yet says so much.

    Thanks for your comment and sharing your six words.

    Prayer Girl

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  9. ShadowJuly 3, 2009 at 1:53 AM

    hey, thanks for your visit. to find the artist, just follow the link i posted below the poem.

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  10. AnonymousAugust 6, 2009 at 4:50 AM

    Very well-written. This could be the morning rush hour in any major metropolitan area in the world.

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