Friday, June 26, 2009

Thunck Thunck

Thunck thunck
Heels beat the cement
Walking forward
Observing eyes
Shaded rims
Watching nothing
Seeing everything
Life surfaces from within
Forward movement
Thunck thunck
Destination:
Distraction

10 comments:

  1. Very unusual manner of expressing! I liked it! It appears so simple but I know it isn't! Good job! Keep writing!!!

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  2. ha! excellent. love that little tattoo...

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  3. Those are really cute shoes! Oh, and I liked the poetry, too. :-)

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  4. Hey your back!

    Wonderful as always!

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  5. Love the simplicity; a lot can be said between the lines...
    -Alex

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  6. Welcome back!! we missed you. Love the shoes ha ha ha.. On a serious note, loved the write. Isn't it funny, but, true how at times in our lives when we really feel deep inside, we find things when we are not looking for them. Life's distractions

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  7. Good to have you back. Thought of you. Poem wonderful with a lot between the lines. Hugs across the pond

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  8. Loved the simplicity of your writing here. Simple yet says so much.

    Thanks for your comment and sharing your six words.

    Prayer Girl

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  9. hey, thanks for your visit. to find the artist, just follow the link i posted below the poem.

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  10. Very well-written. This could be the morning rush hour in any major metropolitan area in the world.

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