I told you,
once.
I have nothing to give,
but myself
I wanted to hope you were not listening
my words went unheard
my words went unheard
lying in wait
a precious stone
it was forseen
one day a curious soul
should stumble across
this abode
gleaming there
a sparkling gem
hues of blue and green
hidden beneath the darkness
hidden beneath the darkness
in life
bound to be picked up
twirled within the fingertips
of appreciation
You knew it would happen
You fortold the light
perhaps,
I was not listening
as our time
passed us by
unknowing
love shared
unable to sustain
not listening.
when curiousity
rubs the soul clean
shining through the
pearlish light
as it naturally must be
You knew it would happen
an opal of oppurtunity
I just was not listening
perhaps you planted the seed
to lie in wait
patient
as our time passed us by
I told you once.
I wish you would have listened.
I wish I did not.
turned now to a ruby
in the heart
a diamond in the eye
of another
I cherish
what never was
never could be
sparkling
in the darkness
gleefully listening
.. an opal of opportunity ...
ReplyDeletea real gem, among many others here!
wow.....
ReplyDeletewhere does it come from?
jb
I read quickly,
ReplyDeletethen slowly,
then line after line,
pausing,
lingering,....then it began to glow,....
not the ruby, not the diamond....
you!...just You!
wow. got lost in the pace and had to turn around...really i was trying to listen...
ReplyDeletebeautiful words to a sad tale...
hey there Kay, welcome back!
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Have a nice day!!
"Opal of opportunity." That's gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteI like "curiosity rubs the soul clean"!
ReplyDeleteHeyyy!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is really good....loved the lines about fingertips of appreciation!!
U write amazing, Kay!
Keep up the great work! :)
Kay,
ReplyDeleteTwo people so close and so far away...
Beautifully written, as always!!
-Alex
Two loving souls but not quite at the same place at the same time.....:-) Hugs
ReplyDeleteA gem of a poem indeed.
ReplyDeleteKay, I so loved that . . and judging by the response, I'm not the only one. Beautiful . . love needs to be appreciated and sometimes you don't know what you have until someone else has it. Kay, every word a gem!!
ReplyDeleteyeah its important to listen and ppl dont appreciate the things or the ppl they hav in their lives until they go far away from them!!a gem remains a gem and if not here than it sparkles in the hands of the other definitely!!like a coal it needs to be polished!!very well written poem and beautiful in its meaning indeed!!keep writing!!
ReplyDeleteoutstanding. the pace grabs and holds. i especially loved 'twirled within the fingertips of appreciation'
ReplyDeleteYou know as I read some of your lines, I actually imagined real people from my life with me.. *sigh!*
ReplyDeleteOnce again, a masterpiece. :)
Cheers,
Annie.
It a real blast....while reading i was like ooohhhhhhh
ReplyDeletegrt wrk..
Jollieess:-)
It is good to have you back. And how MUCH you are back. This is aweseome...til the fingertips. Love across the pond
ReplyDeleteFabulous, Kay, just awesome. I nodded my head, knowing this woman from the inside out. Blessings...
ReplyDeleteThe sense of desperation is both enthralling and overwhelming. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteluv the gems nestling inside the gem of your
ReplyDeletepoem, the breath-taking art of listening,
the sorrow from not listening or not being
heart - the joy of small redemptions.
This is very unique and stunningly beautiful!
ReplyDeletebeautiful Kay. Just beautiful.
ReplyDeleteWonderful, Kay. Close and yet so far...I know this feeling. I think this may be one of your best ever! The words and feelings are so....perfect.
ReplyDeleteThank You!
xxO
Kelly
Love is multifaceted.
ReplyDeleteI have nothing more inspiring to say other than beautiful! :))
ReplyDeletehmmm feel of desperation... lovely in one word!!cya around
ReplyDeletethis has a certain "sparkle" that is very attractive...
ReplyDeletethis is beautifulllll
ReplyDeletelove hurts....and heals....Sarah
ReplyDeleteAwesome blog, and poems! I'll be back for more :p
ReplyDeletecrossing paths!
ReplyDeleteThat photo is like me when I missed a great SALE!
xo*
WOW!! I have been trying to play catch up on my reading as I have been away for a few days. Behold I pop over here and find GEM.. YOU
ReplyDeleteThe photo suits this write.. GOSH how I have looked like that many times.
Woven. The poem is extended down and the weave of it, the play, reminded me of dna strands. And yet, the girl does not get the guy again. Shit.
ReplyDeletexo
erin
powerful poem. talk less, listen more.
ReplyDeleteamazing how this improves life. and you have
expertly illustrated the impact of not
listening tears upon us.