Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Lady of the Pond



if i may
swine dive off the tip top
of the old pine tree
deep into the murky, cold
pond below
gliding along freely
in dark blue midnight cool air
water gliding through
nude limbs
becoming one
water and body
mind and soul
exasperated
floating in the center
gazing amongst the star lit sky
breasts open to the lightening
cool breeze, mist ensued
across damp vulnerability
exposed, hidden
as one
allow me to sink
deep into your quiet darkness
to spread wings
breaking the depths fo the waters edge
lady of the pond
fly
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31 comments:

  1. TheChicGeekNovember 4, 2009 at 10:39 PM

    Very haunting and sensual, Kay. I love this one. The picture is very cool too :)
    Hugs :)

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  2. Brian MillerNovember 4, 2009 at 11:06 PM

    definitely sensual...there is just something about water against your bare skin...

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  3. Anthony DuceNovember 4, 2009 at 11:37 PM

    The words in the case do not need the image. The words are enough to create images in my mind. Although your image is pretty good.

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  4. BernieNovember 5, 2009 at 1:38 AM

    Oh this reminds me of when I use to go skinny dipping, (don't tell anyone) I loved the feel of the water as I swam without my swimsuit......you captured the feeling beautifully.....:-) Hugs

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  5. MarionNovember 5, 2009 at 3:32 AM

    Kay, can I come climb that tree and jump with you? Please, please, please??? So real, I felt the cold water as we broke the surface. You only get better with each poem. Love to you & Blessings...

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  6. ShadowNovember 5, 2009 at 4:44 AM

    you make me want to fly....... great writing kay!

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  7. SaadiNovember 5, 2009 at 7:41 AM

    Wow!!!

    U described everything so well, i ws literally tempted to find ne river/lake and jump in it!!

    Really good!!

    N the image goes with the piece very well...bt it really didn't need tht!!

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  8. Nevine SultanNovember 5, 2009 at 8:57 AM

    I loved this entirely, but especially "... swine dive off the tip top/of the old pine tree..." and "... water and body/mind and soul..." Perfectly beautiful imagery!

    Nevine

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  9. glnrozNovember 5, 2009 at 10:01 AM

    dang! :)

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  10. bardNovember 5, 2009 at 10:12 AM

    Beautiful... you really captured me with this one.

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  11. PaulaNovember 5, 2009 at 10:18 AM

    Wow, you swept me of my feet. How very sensual and haunting.

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  12. JinksyNovember 5, 2009 at 10:44 AM

    Just a thought - did you mean 'swan dive', rather than 'swine dive'? I thought pigs flew, but never heard of them diving...

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  13. AnonymousNovember 5, 2009 at 11:14 AM

    WOW this is deep!! the photo spooked me at first, made me feel the murk and cold, ice, your poem turly captures this. Sensual, DEEP, capturing.. GREAT WRITING as always!
    HUGs and SMILES

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  14. gerry boydNovember 5, 2009 at 11:25 AM

    i like the swine dive. most unexpected.

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  15. Craftsman of lightNovember 5, 2009 at 2:24 PM

    You rock me into you...my hammock is strung between two stars hanging in 'your quiet darkness'!

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  16. Tom BaileyNovember 5, 2009 at 4:06 PM

    "across damp vulnerability exposed, hidden
    as one" I like this it matches with the photo perfectly. The photo reminds me of a water isoloation chamber.

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  17. jbkrostNovember 5, 2009 at 6:02 PM

    thats really nice, and some what dark.
    I like that
    jb

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  18. TheChicGeekNovember 5, 2009 at 9:55 PM

    Hi Kay :)
    I know you didn't feel well so I popped over to leave you a little love, a big hug and some healing light!
    Feel better soon!
    Love and Hugs :)
    Kelly

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  19. JosephineNovember 5, 2009 at 10:12 PM

    Kay,
    Love this one!! I wrote a short story a while ago and that poem fits it so well. Great work!!
    -Alex

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  20. BernieNovember 5, 2009 at 11:52 PM

    Kay I just read in one of your comments that you have the H1N1 flu.....so sorry. Drink tons of fluids, get lots of rest and I hope you feel better soon.......:-) Hugs

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  21. AnonymousNovember 6, 2009 at 2:06 AM

    When we become naked, we can seamlessly merge with that in Nature which is receptive to our Hearts desire.

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  22. HaRy!!November 6, 2009 at 10:04 AM

    made me fly!!

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  23. AnonymousNovember 6, 2009 at 12:49 PM

    just popping over to send you great wishes for a wonderful peaceful, happy weekend.. SMILES

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  24. NancyNovember 6, 2009 at 1:06 PM

    Just beautiful, Kay. I could feel the water gliding past limbs and the dark enclosing my body...

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  25. LarryGNovember 6, 2009 at 4:20 PM

    that is a lovely flight!
    so good to be melded into something larger than self...

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  26. A learnerNovember 6, 2009 at 11:41 PM

    mesmerizing

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  27. Anil PNovember 7, 2009 at 7:37 AM

    A single sweep of an emotion, at once an entreaty and a wish. Well said.

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  28. SaadiNovember 8, 2009 at 2:15 PM

    Hey!!

    Check out the 'Play On' review by me and leave a comment!

    The link is http://thesoulboard.blogspot.com/2009/11/play-on-carrie-underwood.html

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  29. WalkerNovember 9, 2009 at 7:36 PM

    Very nice.
    Coast to the bottom and hear the silence

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  30. FireblossomNovember 20, 2009 at 7:06 PM

    Um, I'm wondering about that "swine dive" too.

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  31. AnonymousNovember 24, 2009 at 12:41 PM

    The combination of this picture and your words are excellent.

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