Friday, December 11, 2009

Wishes



if you wish
year after year
blowing out candles
finding that first star each night
closing your eyes
in somber silence
praying
wishing
with all your might
blowing kisses
to seal each wish
wrapped in hope
it will
one day
come true
be the believer
may fresh wishes
wash over you
falling upon
persistant dreams
conquered


41 comments:

  1. a beautiful blesing you have bestowed on us today...wishes do come true...unless they dont, which of course means you did not need it in the first place...smiles.

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  2. If I wish for a wishing well, would that wish come true too? :P

    Cheers...

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  3. Quite fragmented and modernistic. However, lack of punctuation had me wondering at some instances.

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  4. Beautifully scripted... Closing your silence in somber silence praying... wishing... very true...

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  5. What a magnificent photo! Beautiful words too!

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  6. Oh, wow!!! ...and the photo goes with the poem very well... :)

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  7. Beautifully written. Love the magic behind it. Great pic!

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  8. Dear Kay, I have done all of these things and will continue too and some have even come true!
    .......:-) Hugs

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  9. Not sure about the results wishes brings. Love your words though, and the photo.

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  10. Right, I am going back to wishing for a Mercedes ;0)

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  11. I enjoyed that very much. Thank you. :)

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  12. Awww, I love this Kay! Beautiful and true. I think if we keep on believing and wishing and putting our love out to the world it does come back to us! Cheers to wishes and dreams! May all of yours come true!
    Thank you for this bright spot of hope and light today!
    Hugs and Love :))
    So good to see you here again!
    xxO
    Kelly

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  13. be the believer. :)
    hopes and dreams do come true....
    believer is an action word isn't it? maybe the most important one of all.

    beautiful Kay. as you are always.

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  14. it really is beautiful
    And I wish you a happy year full of great poems like this one ;)

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  15. Kay the believer, Kay the hopegiver! Yepp, wishes come true. This is once again so very beautiful. Your soul is in your pen! Love from Munich.

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  16. Kay, I love this hope-filled, upbeat poem. It's like a perfect prescription on this dreary, cold, rainy day here. I wish the same for you, sweet poet-friend. Blessings!

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  17. this feels like warm water washing over you. love it. Sarah

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  18. I always wish , and wish and wish.
    I wish I could write something so heartfelt as this.
    I wish you and yours many blessings for a happy Holiday.

    HUGS

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  19. wishes are like kisses of the angels, sometimes you get them if you really need them...

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  20. Kay,
    Love your words, so true!! Wishing you all the Best!!
    -Alex

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  21. loved the poetry.
    Kind of motivated me..
    First time here..
    Kudos 2 u.
    Nuts

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  22. Your words tell me to have a life's plan and allow for adjustments and keep worthwhile goals. Thankyou for your artistic poetry.

    Hugs, Fab

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  23. Had to return to enjoy again. Hugs

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  24. Nice combination. Simplistic. I likes.

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  25. I love this one. Such a positive message with great things tied into it.

    Thank you sincerely for sharing.

    Tom Bailey

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  26. oOoo...oui. wishing wishing, the word itself
    sounds reverent and true. lovely poem.

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  27. What a lovely gift for Christmas you have given us. I wish I could pen such beautiful words. Happy Holidays

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  28. Another excellent piece. I hope that you and your family have a very happy holiday season.

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  29. Passing by and wishing oyu a calm and peaceful time. Hugs, Paula

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  30. I truly hope all your dreams for Christmas come true…

    Hope, peace and love…

    Xoxoxo

    Ps: I would meet you under the mistletoe anytime.

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  31. Lovely Kay,
    Hopes and dreams and wishes...all this you have given me through your beautiful , sensitive soul poems!

    i have knocked at your doors and you have open it with a smile.
    You have allowed me to regain myself into one single piece again.
    You came with your healing touch.
    leaving me herbs made of verbs....through which my emotional sinews and muscles renewed its strength.

    what else can be a better gift than your terse words winking, smiling.....bringing me from you those things words can't translate but can make everything express from within the silence of love and compassion.

    Thankyou for everything Kay, wish you a wonderful year ending, a merry christmas and a bright and a beautiful new year!

    hugs
    joseph.

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  32. Very nice.

    Happy holidays and i hope next year is a brighter one than the last.

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  33. Hi Kay :) I have been missing you!
    I want to wish you a Merry Christmas...May all your dreams come true in 2010!
    Love and a Big Christmas Hug,
    Kelly

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  34. this is beautiful Kay, I have missed your writing!

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  35. Wishes - Magical poem ... appeals to my supersticious nature.

    I love this, 'wishing with all your might'; 'be the believer'.

    I am a believer Kay. I believe great things are on the horizon for both of us ... All the best for 2010 :)x

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  36. Found you at Dulce's place "Sweeter" etc. Anyway, I noticed so many of my "friends" commenting here, so I felt left out --grin!

    My message/comment. Faith is necessary, wonderful. Even more meaningful--to me--is TRUST

    Real nice blog you own, and thoughtful postings.
    Thanks!

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