Wednesday, February 10, 2010

We is Us



love.
as i am.
as you is.
as we are.
completed.
you is me.
me is you.
us is we.
loving me.
loving you.
loving us.
loving we.
we is us.
lovingly.

19 comments:

  1. So simple yet so beautiful....why didn't I think of this....love it.......:-) Hugs

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  2. Hey beautiful writer I hope you are all good!

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  3. beautiful...................

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  4. So lovely!
    Love this, Kay!

    Margie:)

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  5. So simple and the ending, achingly beautiful! What a poet you are!

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  6. Love all your poetry it's really great! It gets to the very soul!

    I would consider it an honor if a fellow poet like yourself would follow my blog of poetry.

    http://thehumanicana.blogspot.com/

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  7. This sounds like it could make for an intersting song - it is well thought out but simple and fun.

    Best regards,
    Tom Bailey

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  8. there is life in these simple phrases. it pulsates and beats.

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  9. Kay,
    And I love how you played the words here!!
    Very sweet!!
    -Alex

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  10. Very sweet.. i love it!

    www.meetvenus.blogspot.com

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  11. The sweetest..!!completely taken by that one Kay! gentle breeze is giggling in my hair now..love it!

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