Thursday, February 4, 2010

Another Blow


sinister gods of the universe
preparing, diligently
come forth
another...

blow, blow, BLOW!
all-encompassing
oblivious, scattered minds
feeling safe

blind-sided
by fates...too many
wrongful duties
to of which is the purpose?

insight to thyself
knowledge
good, not enough
bad, be of plenty

growth...
endured
each blow,
strengthing

knock down, no more
hurt, no longer
existence
forthcoming

24 comments:

  1. I feel that fighter....won't give in...won't give up.

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  2. BE strong....:)
    Just do it..
    M sure u can get out of anything...

    Cheers

    Nuts

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  3. It is not about what happens to us...it is all about how we react to it.........:-) Hugs

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  4. Typifies the cliche of that which does not kill you.

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  5. i'm constantly amazed by the strength of the human spirit. nicely done!

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  6. A stimulating post. Fantastic image and the lines develop the thought beautifully.

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  7. knock down, no more
    hurt, no longer
    existence
    forthcoming...

    when you lose the feeling of hurt, you are bound to get up and break away.

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  8. What knocks you down makes you strong as you push back up again until you can't be pushed no more

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  9. Kay,
    Fantastic and very powerful words...
    Yes, the "gods of the universe" have a plan to round us all up, dehumanize and turn us into the numb, following sheep... If we get stronger and fight back with knowlege there is hope for the existence...
    Excellent write!!
    -Alex

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  10. In the words of my wee Scottish Granny "what doesn't break us makes us stronger!"

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  11. Sleeping on the train tracks may result in a sore back. It is not recommended!

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  12. 過去的事早已消失,未來的事更渺不可知,只有現在是真實的..............................

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  13. I liked what sarah and walker said. I like the comeback tone underlying this. This was a fun one to read.

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  14. ... growth
    endured
    each blow
    strengthening ...

    Ye ... bring it on!!!! When the going gets tough ... the tough get ...

    :)

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  15. Very nice, sad in a way. Stop by, poetry every tuesday. ;)

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  16. Very powerful words. Thank you for them.

    PG

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  17. Inspiring!
    wrongful duties that's a good reminder for me at least~
    xo

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  18. I love the structure, flow, and style of this piece. Beautifully written.

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  19. Your work has been plagiarized...
    http://mkalkunte.blogspot.com/2010/03/blow-over-blow.html

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