sinister gods of the universe
preparing, diligently
come forth
another...
blow, blow, BLOW!
all-encompassing
oblivious, scattered minds
feeling safe
blind-sided
by fates...too many
wrongful duties
to of which is the purpose?
insight to thyself
knowledge
good, not enough
bad, be of plenty
growth...
endured
each blow,
strengthing
knock down, no more
hurt, no longer
existence
forthcoming
I feel that fighter....won't give in...won't give up.
ReplyDeleteget back up...
ReplyDeletesmiles.
BE strong....:)
ReplyDeleteJust do it..
M sure u can get out of anything...
Cheers
Nuts
It is not about what happens to us...it is all about how we react to it.........:-) Hugs
ReplyDeleteTypifies the cliche of that which does not kill you.
ReplyDeletei'm constantly amazed by the strength of the human spirit. nicely done!
ReplyDeleteNo fight should be lost...
ReplyDeleteA stimulating post. Fantastic image and the lines develop the thought beautifully.
ReplyDeleteOnce again,,,,
ReplyDeleteknock down, no more
ReplyDeletehurt, no longer
existence
forthcoming...
when you lose the feeling of hurt, you are bound to get up and break away.
What knocks you down makes you strong as you push back up again until you can't be pushed no more
ReplyDeleteKay,
ReplyDeleteFantastic and very powerful words...
Yes, the "gods of the universe" have a plan to round us all up, dehumanize and turn us into the numb, following sheep... If we get stronger and fight back with knowlege there is hope for the existence...
Excellent write!!
-Alex
In the words of my wee Scottish Granny "what doesn't break us makes us stronger!"
ReplyDeleteSleeping on the train tracks may result in a sore back. It is not recommended!
ReplyDeleteDark and lovely.
ReplyDeleteYou will prevail!
ReplyDeleteMargie:)
I liked what sarah and walker said. I like the comeback tone underlying this. This was a fun one to read.
ReplyDelete... growth
ReplyDeleteendured
each blow
strengthening ...
Ye ... bring it on!!!! When the going gets tough ... the tough get ...
:)
Very nice, sad in a way. Stop by, poetry every tuesday. ;)
ReplyDeleteVery powerful words. Thank you for them.
ReplyDeletePG
Inspiring!
ReplyDeletewrongful duties that's a good reminder for me at least~
xo
I love the structure, flow, and style of this piece. Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteYour work has been plagiarized...
ReplyDeletehttp://mkalkunte.blogspot.com/2010/03/blow-over-blow.html