Monday, February 15, 2010

skies


relinquished gestures rendered...
sincere
soft, the lips of heavens whisper
breeze brushing slightly
to pitter-patter the earlobes
of unease
forthcoming the rivers, of anticipation
changing course, the time-watchers error
bequests enchantment,
dreamers barer, the eyes of the sun
warmth hindered there
beneath savory sins
you can not bear
trollop along, squalling vanity
reflection not of mirror
seek to the skies
reflected in waters
it is there
found, bequeathed.
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17 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2010 at 3:15 PM

    love this.....

    a lot,,,

    a kiss for you..

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  2. Brian MillerFebruary 15, 2010 at 3:57 PM

    wow, that was a cool ride...earlobes of unease...nice.

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  3. JinksyFebruary 15, 2010 at 4:15 PM

    pitter-patter the earlobes
    of unease

    That was my favourite bit, too...ticklish!

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  4. Anthony DuceFebruary 15, 2010 at 4:23 PM

    Like this a lot. Took me somewhere else today.

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  5. BernieFebruary 15, 2010 at 7:01 PM

    Oh I can feel the warm sun on my face as I look at the most beautiful blue sky....I listen to the river as I near it and I am having the most wonderful time....:-) Hugs

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  6. Tabitha BirdFebruary 15, 2010 at 9:15 PM

    Happy belated valentines! This poem is beautiful!

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  7. glnrozFebruary 16, 2010 at 12:38 AM

    many direcions, to me. Amazing how varied your ability is, with words.

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  8. HariniFebruary 16, 2010 at 1:14 AM

    This one is so good. How to you come up with so many. I was planning on writing a poem and dedicating it to someone and all i came up with was 'As the sun goes down'.

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  9. tattytiaraFebruary 16, 2010 at 1:15 AM

    Rivers of anticipation changing course - that got a smile of familiarity on this end.

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  10. LenoreNeverM♡reFebruary 16, 2010 at 2:50 AM

    moments reflected by the light indeed~
    xo

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  11. ShadowFebruary 16, 2010 at 3:37 AM

    nature sure evokes wonderful emotions

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  12. Just Be RealFebruary 16, 2010 at 5:13 AM

    Kay, very nice. Blessings.

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  13. Wine and WordsFebruary 16, 2010 at 1:40 PM

    "Pitter patter the earlobes of unease." Such a fabulous line. There are phrases that you know will just stay with you forever like an on-going echo. This is one...and my ears are right now thus. Extremely uneasy.

    Love, Annie

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  14. LarryGFebruary 16, 2010 at 5:04 PM

    those rivers of anticipation are some lovely waters!

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  15. NadegeFebruary 17, 2010 at 4:37 AM

    beautiful imagery -like falling into a looking
    glass of surreal love.

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  16. Dave KingFebruary 17, 2010 at 5:40 AM

    Some excellent phrases in this. Enticing.

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  17. JosephineFebruary 20, 2010 at 1:02 AM

    Beautiful, taking charge of the feelings...

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