Monday, February 15, 2010

skies


relinquished gestures rendered...
sincere
soft, the lips of heavens whisper
breeze brushing slightly
to pitter-patter the earlobes
of unease
forthcoming the rivers, of anticipation
changing course, the time-watchers error
bequests enchantment,
dreamers barer, the eyes of the sun
warmth hindered there
beneath savory sins
you can not bear
trollop along, squalling vanity
reflection not of mirror
seek to the skies
reflected in waters
it is there
found, bequeathed.

17 comments:

  1. wow, that was a cool ride...earlobes of unease...nice.

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  2. pitter-patter the earlobes
    of unease

    That was my favourite bit, too...ticklish!

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  3. Like this a lot. Took me somewhere else today.

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  4. Oh I can feel the warm sun on my face as I look at the most beautiful blue sky....I listen to the river as I near it and I am having the most wonderful time....:-) Hugs

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  5. Happy belated valentines! This poem is beautiful!

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  6. many direcions, to me. Amazing how varied your ability is, with words.

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  7. This one is so good. How to you come up with so many. I was planning on writing a poem and dedicating it to someone and all i came up with was 'As the sun goes down'.

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  8. Rivers of anticipation changing course - that got a smile of familiarity on this end.

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  9. moments reflected by the light indeed~
    xo

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  10. nature sure evokes wonderful emotions

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  11. "Pitter patter the earlobes of unease." Such a fabulous line. There are phrases that you know will just stay with you forever like an on-going echo. This is one...and my ears are right now thus. Extremely uneasy.

    Love, Annie

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  12. those rivers of anticipation are some lovely waters!

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  13. beautiful imagery -like falling into a looking
    glass of surreal love.

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  14. Some excellent phrases in this. Enticing.

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  15. Beautiful, taking charge of the feelings...

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