Tuesday, January 26, 2010

One


you're here
inside me
nothing soft about it
a blatant blow
torpedo typhoon
stirring up
dramatic ends
tangled in the web
of which our relationship
stands,
fast and furious
time provides no lines
no bounderies
entwined in weeds
i seek to run free
but you are there
running with-in me
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27 comments:

  1. Concord CarpenterJanuary 26, 2010 at 6:23 AM

    I like that!

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  2. Brian MillerJanuary 26, 2010 at 6:25 AM

    tearing furiously to get out...hard once they are inside you. nicely done!

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  3. ShadowJanuary 26, 2010 at 7:59 AM

    running with-in me.... i like that!

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  4. Anthony DuceJanuary 26, 2010 at 8:32 AM

    Like this One a lot. Good image too.

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  5. PaulaJanuary 26, 2010 at 10:01 AM

    running with-in me
    very strong and powerful. LOVE IT

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  6. Iddy AlbatrossJanuary 26, 2010 at 11:04 AM

    Reminded me of a song... it's called 'Schizophrenic Conversations' by Staind. Heard it?

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  7. MargieJanuary 26, 2010 at 12:00 PM

    Powerful words, kay!
    I enjoyed it!

    Margie:)

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 26, 2010 at 12:50 PM

    takes two to tango... well maybe thats not true but in this case I think so. But I not sure it always help to make things clearer.


    very nice....

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  9. bardJanuary 26, 2010 at 2:11 PM

    I like it too!

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  10. LarryGJanuary 26, 2010 at 2:21 PM

    sensual mix this
    lovely allusions

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  11. Dulçe ♥January 26, 2010 at 4:48 PM

    Girl! Get out of there! :)

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  12. BernieJanuary 26, 2010 at 6:09 PM

    One can never run from oneself....:-) Hugs

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  13. Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in ProgressJanuary 27, 2010 at 1:02 PM

    love this - can so relate.

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  14. glnrozJanuary 27, 2010 at 7:19 PM

    I saw two faces of this thing...

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  15. FareedJanuary 30, 2010 at 7:02 PM

    Must listen to Part of me by Tool. Similar thoughts shared there, with similar strength.

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  16. BlaséJanuary 31, 2010 at 3:18 PM

    Oh My GOODNESS!

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  17. AnonymousFebruary 1, 2010 at 4:32 AM

    Fabulous Kay

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  18. NancyFebruary 1, 2010 at 7:44 PM

    Good stuff. Image was great.

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  19. FireblossomFebruary 1, 2010 at 8:23 PM

    I asked you before, Kay. Get outta my head! ;-)

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  20. N JFebruary 2, 2010 at 12:31 PM

    Heart throbbing... Amazing work!

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  21. Tabitha BirdFebruary 2, 2010 at 10:34 PM

    Oh the intricate web of freedom. Love it :)

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  22. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2010 at 11:39 AM

    Stares in disbelief at a good safe distance.

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  23. Maude LynnFebruary 3, 2010 at 1:28 PM

    I love that last line!

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  24. MandyFebruary 3, 2010 at 5:32 PM

    A whole blog about poetry...

    I think I am home.

    I cannot wait to read them all.

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  25. JosephineFebruary 5, 2010 at 11:45 PM

    Kay,
    Internal struggle of desire to belong and be free... not quite possible at the same time...
    Like this one a lot!!
    -Alex

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  26. miaFebruary 7, 2010 at 7:09 AM

    oui, that eternal lover comes into our
    life is becomes each breath we take...
    you've captured this feeling so well.

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  27. Alex the manFebruary 15, 2010 at 1:24 AM

    Hi I am the artist who created that image, it is a photo of my cousin and I created it so that it does invoke those kinds of emotions, I am glad it could be included here.. nice Poem very passionate Kay

    Alex

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