Tuesday, January 26, 2010

One


you're here
inside me
nothing soft about it
a blatant blow
torpedo typhoon
stirring up
dramatic ends
tangled in the web
of which our relationship
stands,
fast and furious
time provides no lines
no bounderies
entwined in weeds
i seek to run free
but you are there
running with-in me

27 comments:

  1. tearing furiously to get out...hard once they are inside you. nicely done!

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  2. running with-in me.... i like that!

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  3. Like this One a lot. Good image too.

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  4. running with-in me
    very strong and powerful. LOVE IT

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  5. Reminded me of a song... it's called 'Schizophrenic Conversations' by Staind. Heard it?

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  6. Powerful words, kay!
    I enjoyed it!

    Margie:)

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  7. takes two to tango... well maybe thats not true but in this case I think so. But I not sure it always help to make things clearer.


    very nice....

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  8. sensual mix this
    lovely allusions

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  9. One can never run from oneself....:-) Hugs

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  10. I saw two faces of this thing...

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  11. Must listen to Part of me by Tool. Similar thoughts shared there, with similar strength.

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  12. I asked you before, Kay. Get outta my head! ;-)

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  13. Heart throbbing... Amazing work!

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  14. Oh the intricate web of freedom. Love it :)

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  15. Stares in disbelief at a good safe distance.

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  16. A whole blog about poetry...

    I think I am home.

    I cannot wait to read them all.

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  17. Kay,
    Internal struggle of desire to belong and be free... not quite possible at the same time...
    Like this one a lot!!
    -Alex

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  18. oui, that eternal lover comes into our
    life is becomes each breath we take...
    you've captured this feeling so well.

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  19. Hi I am the artist who created that image, it is a photo of my cousin and I created it so that it does invoke those kinds of emotions, I am glad it could be included here.. nice Poem very passionate Kay

    Alex

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