Monday, July 5, 2010

paradise



take me away
to a land of forgiveness
peace and purity
glam and passion
take me beyond,
to a land far from here
no baggage required
heading for the horizons
into sunsets and sunrises
perfectly blended
with moonlit waters
calmly reflecting,
a surrender
to you
from me
i’ll find my way,
if you’ll take me



23 comments:

  1. 'Take me away to the land of forgiveness...' ooh love that! And yes, take me too :)

    Beautiful poem Kay :)

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  2. I love it! Nice words calm the souls of the world.

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  3. THis is so calming. The way you describe the nature is just amazing!

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  4. think that would be erfect...and if they are willing to forgive i imagine they will take you...

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  5. beautiful lines Kay... it's like i'm saying those words to someone... i can so relate to this.

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  6. oh i could live dat world through ur words ..
    i wish smbdy really takes me dere!!

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  7. nice :)
    searching 4 d paradise....

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  8. elegant. that road leading to the horizon is so captivating.

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  9. Does it depend on a he or a she or on that beautiful Nature you've depicted?

    Great poem dear Kay
    I so LOVE coming here!
    D.

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  10. Wow Kay, this poem and picture is captivating. Blessings.

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  11. Forgiveness, what a lovely old fashioned idea. As soon as I finish loading, I'll look into it!

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  12. The land of forgiveness sounds like a pretty good place. Liked this a lot.

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  14. Very nice poem.

    Expresses an inner state of distress, the search for a idyllic image.
    But actually I say that you know what you leave, but ... you do not know what you find.
    I do not look for that distant land, you will not find ever .... it doesn't exist.

    Kay.. not to leave to take you.... will find your road.

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  15. Very nice poem.

    Expresses an inner state of distress, the search for a idyllic image.
    But actually I say that you know what you leave, but ... you do not know what you find.
    I do not look for that distant land, you will not find ever .... it doesn't exist.

    Kay.. not to leave to take you.... will find your road.

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  16. Everybody's dream, beautifully expressed.

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  17. Kay this is beautiful, shows how vunerable we can be, love it.......:-) Hugs

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  18. Your poetry certainly allows the mind and heart to escape. Beautiful writing here. Hope you had a Happy 4th as well :)

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  19. Beautiful! I've got my bags packed, now when do we leave?

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