take me away
to a land of forgiveness
peace and purity
glam and passion
take me beyond,
to a land far from here
no baggage required
heading for the horizons
into sunsets and sunrises
perfectly blended
with moonlit waters
calmly reflecting,
a surrender
to you
from me
i’ll find my way,
if you’ll take me
'Take me away to the land of forgiveness...' ooh love that! And yes, take me too :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem Kay :)
I love it! Nice words calm the souls of the world.
ReplyDeleteTHis is so calming. The way you describe the nature is just amazing!
ReplyDeletethink that would be erfect...and if they are willing to forgive i imagine they will take you...
ReplyDeletebeautiful lines Kay... it's like i'm saying those words to someone... i can so relate to this.
ReplyDeleteoh i could live dat world through ur words ..
ReplyDeletei wish smbdy really takes me dere!!
nice :)
ReplyDeletesearching 4 d paradise....
ah, i adore this one.
ReplyDeleteI love your writeup..
ReplyDeleteelegant. that road leading to the horizon is so captivating.
ReplyDeleteDoes it depend on a he or a she or on that beautiful Nature you've depicted?
ReplyDeleteGreat poem dear Kay
I so LOVE coming here!
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Wow Kay, this poem and picture is captivating. Blessings.
ReplyDeleteForgiveness, what a lovely old fashioned idea. As soon as I finish loading, I'll look into it!
ReplyDeleteThe land of forgiveness sounds like a pretty good place. Liked this a lot.
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ReplyDeleteVery nice poem.
ReplyDeleteExpresses an inner state of distress, the search for a idyllic image.
But actually I say that you know what you leave, but ... you do not know what you find.
I do not look for that distant land, you will not find ever .... it doesn't exist.
Kay.. not to leave to take you.... will find your road.
Very nice poem.
ReplyDeleteExpresses an inner state of distress, the search for a idyllic image.
But actually I say that you know what you leave, but ... you do not know what you find.
I do not look for that distant land, you will not find ever .... it doesn't exist.
Kay.. not to leave to take you.... will find your road.
Everybody's dream, beautifully expressed.
ReplyDeletecome here Kay...
ReplyDeleteKay this is beautiful, shows how vunerable we can be, love it.......:-) Hugs
ReplyDeleteYour poetry certainly allows the mind and heart to escape. Beautiful writing here. Hope you had a Happy 4th as well :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I've got my bags packed, now when do we leave?
ReplyDeletemercy, woman.
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