Wednesday, September 29, 2010

A woman's blush



i wished upon forever
through the star-studded
gaze in your eyes

with a mirrored reflection of
hope lust entrust

arising into remembrance
the beauty lying within forgiveness
unbeknownst how much would be taken
between the fingers of our touch

grasping the breath
of which we both subside
this moment,
as much yours
as it is mine

tickles my girlish emotions
endearing the ever-lasting blush
staking claim
into womanhood

both
to be
loved & despised

26 comments:

  1. I wrote something along the same lines a few years ago... "love & despised" at the same time... interesting!

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  2. sometimes I fail to understand the silent emotions.. while reading this I remembered of those sometimes..

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  3. Oh, this is so very true. Ypour line about the silent emotions reminds me strongly on my fav quote: if you dont understand ym silence, you wont understand my words.
    Love to you!

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  4. Fragrance of lust and love intertwined between the lines…

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  5. if despised then i would wonder at the authenticity of the love...lust perhaps but...nice contradiction kay..

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  6. oh wow, kay, this is GREAT! the light and the dark of love. always intertwined. and thank you for your friendship, love and hugs!!!

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  7. love it, just beautiful...and conjures memories of a few youthful relationships :)

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  8. I would have changed the order of the last part thusly:

    To be
    both
    loved & despised


    Otherwise it sounds like you're talking about two people being loved and despised.
    (But hey, that's just my opinion!)

    Nice piece!

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  9. I don't want to lose the girlish blush. Rarely seen but much appreciated. Wish that it could remain, when the fingers have taken more than their share.

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  10. i wished upon forever
    through the star-studded
    gaze in your eyes

    those line kay, took me..and yes,i still blush like teenager..somehow love never fades in me..i loved this one so much! AMAZING! ;)

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  11. amazing write... expressed so brillaintly... touching...

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  12. between the fingers of our touch,

    yeah, Kay... delicate smoothing, i feel chills on my skin

    passionate experience!

    thanks and greetings

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  13. *both
    to be
    loved & despised*.

    Well this is pure yin yang... as everything else in this life... but love-oh, love is somehow too special to...just accept it.

    Great poem, dear Kay
    ;)

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  14. Kay you are so improving an already wonderful gift of writing poetry. Not only love this but have lived it.......:-) Hugs

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  15. Great pic.. so powerful and keep writing it is wonderful. Carla

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  16. You write beautifully !
    gaurav...

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  17. Your poems are like books you open and get lost in, beautiful page once again!

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  18. Oh my goodness that's beautiful. *sigh*

    http://then-she-wrote.blogspot.com/

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  19. I have a special thing for you in my blog. An award!!!

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  20. Kay,
    Thanks for stopping by my blog.
    This is a beautiful poem and I love the picture.

    PG

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  21. both - loved and despised - what a power sentence - but he would be an idiot to despise you...

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  22. nice and lovely words--i appreciate this.
    Best Wishes.
    Hemant
    http://childrensheaven.blogspot.com

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  23. you are funny yourself Kay, yeah passion does seem to be strong between those who feeling for each each are fluid and both love and to despise or forces felt thatt come and go like the tide.
    maybe that is the only way it can happen, It is nice to dream though that there can passion that is feroricious but not dispicable :) unless kay has been a very bad girl and thats her kink

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