Tuesday, January 18, 2011

your visit last night



you came to me
last eve
creeping through
the shadows of my dream
i felt your eyes
observing
my life unfolding
without you

and it was there
where your presence
was felt
that i came to know
i would always
have you
if only in my dreams.

26 comments:

  1. Darn! And here I thought I'd been quiet while peeking in your window. (LOL!)

    But seriously, this is nice and dreamy and romantic.

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  2. smiles...always...and its going to hurt so good...nice write...

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  3. Then...
    The sun has raised.
    The new day with new dreams are going on.

    Subtle, melancholic and such simple poem.
    Simplicity... yum!
    Kay, you make me smile.
    Thank you.

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  4. Visitors can drop by at any thime and any form, sometimes, doesn't it seem?

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  5. If only in my dreams...if only- sometimes that's all we need

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  6. The words are great, and conjure up past times, dreams I wanted to hold onto. I love the image….

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  7. ohhh I love this one Kay! If only in my dreams....that's what keeps us going, isn't it?

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  8. you've outdone yourself with the love, feelings, emotions, dreams and desires expressed in these 2 verses....

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  9. Very beautiful.
    This expresses the simplicity of the feelings that at times ourselves we make ourselves difficult.

    Kay .. the reality is different.

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  10. Heartbreakingly beautiful. I checked from where your internet connected - Ruther Glen. Yes, You are just down the road! Like this thought. My fav poet just next door now. Hugs and love down the road

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  11. This is so beautiful! I love the feeling of being so connected to someone that you can sense them at an etheric level.

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  12. Very touching... someone you feel always remain within us...

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  13. Nice words, very touching. Good to see that people are always around, even if it is only in dreams.

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  14. I am pretty sure the partial profile in the image, knows who would never, ever say no to you

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  15. How lovely. Soothing.

    I have an award on my blog for you. Stylish,it suits you.

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  16. Gosh *blushes* I'm not going anywhere :)

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  17. in dreams - only in dreams - how we live and love in this world where all our dreams come true!

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  18. Presence and dreams are safer than reality ... I think a little of both (reality and dreams) makes for a great life!!! :)

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  19. May yours be always sweet and sensual as your poem,
    and slip out into reality!

    hugs Kay!

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  20. Kay, you are a delicate writer, this poem
    is a heart tugger.

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