Friday, March 12, 2010

At War


mutilated minds
corrupt,
devoid of emotion,
social-retard-ism
captivated today
seen on the wide-screen
of which the world enraptured
compounded and bound
to the atrocities of society
victim to thyself,
when media casts spite in the
glare of doubt
to the existence of good vs. evil
conspiracy derived,
society hidden inside
not of warmth and glee
but secluded, deep
to the satire of belief
no more the existence of mankind,
depleted the visions of hope
of which our land derived
falling privy to demands
of evil
when only one voice, is spoken
one voice, be heard
the world withdraws within
mankind, imploded.

wrote this a while ago...found it fitting to the....situation...


27 comments:

  1. I am in the dark. What situation? Should I know this person? Am I that much of a dork? Probably.

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  2. Damn. That was tough. Awesome. Tough.

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  3. This is mighty intense! Well done! Keep writing!!!

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  4. Of course...nothing to do with your excellently inspired-and-constructed poem...but...well, "We have met the enemy--and he is US!"

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  5. the brutal truth

    and sometimes the truth sucks


    and then out of the darkness the brave walks forward...

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  6. I was stunned when this article crossed
    my breakfast table -- what a sad commentary
    on society.

    Your poem is powerful.

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  7. That was awesome... really really awesome. But what situation and who is that person :P.

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  8. Very well written. Makes you think.

    At least someone don't have writters block when it comes to poetry. I can't write one if I tried.

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  9. Sometimes one voice is all it takes to help many others.......the down side is the one who has suffered for the benefit of others. Your words are powerful, beautiful and so needed at this time.......:-) Hugs

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  10. Kay, I know about the girl, the tux and prom not happening. To be honest I couldnt believe this. Your words are much needed. Thanks so much for this. Hugs, global citizien Paula

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  11. Even in the German News:
    http://www.spiegel.de/schulspiegel/ausland/0,1518,683000,00.html
    Paula

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  12. Everyone should come here to read you KAY... this cruelty hurts so much... how can humans do such things? we'lll never understand.
    great post, dear.

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  13. ur silence is really loud reaching out to every1......an awesum realistic expression......

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  14. Such powerful words, Kay.
    Excellent writing!

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  15. I read the post and the comments that followed. It seems like a very sad story (forgive my ignorance). Your words have been much needed.

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  16. War isn't pretty.
    The war within and outside leaves but tattered souls to fertilize what remains with one hope that something better can grow

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  17. Great work done Kay..
    A very loud voice..

    Kudos

    Cheers

    Nuts

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  18. Beautiful poem Kay...I wish I understood the context of this piece. Nonetheless, it is a great commentary on society and its cruelty.

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  19. Passing by to show some love. Thinking of you. Had to re-read some poems.

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  20. Wow! I am a brand new follower and must say this was very intense and eye opening!

    Wonderful work

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  21. Great words and very powerful! Thank you for sharing!

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  22. I think it is a disgrace. The school are out of date.http://www.cbsnews.com/8301-504083_162-20000972-504083.html
    Great work with your words!

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