wind cracking the window pane,
alone inside, the widower
staring back, her reflection
darkened the night outside her window
howling gusts bring forth a shiver
a single light flickers,
that of her own
blazed, enlightened
day and night
she is frightened
the rage of which she rid of
dwindled down,
the embers exist
burning still the pain
what once there was,
still there to scold her
abandoned, abused
hands blood stained…
his spirit taunts her
VERY POWERFUL, I ENJOYED THE DARKNESS YET BEAUTY BEHIND IT....
ReplyDeleteeternal time plays the tango,
ReplyDeletehis spirit dance with her pain,
both in the wind...
Shiver is right. Even the photo is malevolent! Rage dwindled down to embers. Wish they would finally become ash and float like peet dirt towards someone elses windowsill.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful writing Kay!
this one gave me shivers...beautifully rendered kay. you set just the mood.
ReplyDeleteYou're a word-magician, Kay. I love the dark mood of this one. Blessings!
ReplyDeletejust got back from my walk outside.....
ReplyDeleteGosh, it kind of made me tremble!
ReplyDeleteYou sure can write incredible poems, kay.
Margie :)
OMG... I am trembling and looking around to see if I feel that presence... That happens when you get rid of him...eventually,,, no matter the way, the blood, the liberation...the...
ReplyDeleteOMG again
This is brilliant!
;)
I'm certainly not looking forward to this chapter in my life. ((shivers))
ReplyDeleteI am a widow Kay......this brought tears to my eyes especially looking through the window into the darkness....I could relate to this, I have done this often........:-) Hugs
ReplyDeleteA very uncomfortable image. Will be with me for quite a while.
ReplyDeleteGone, but I'd guess NEVER forgotten...
ReplyDelete(Shiver!)
cold and dark. she's better off without him...
ReplyDeleteI read this one through serveral times. It brought me shivers and stuck inside my mind. Made me uncomfortable, too. You write so well. The mood is just so cold and dark in this one. I'll have to agree with Shadow though, she's better off without him. Well done, Kay.
ReplyDeletewhoa!!! it went right through me....
ReplyDeleteKay,
ReplyDeleteThis was a spooky one...
Beautifully written!! -Alex
How profound!
ReplyDeleteVery shivery! An d an intrigujing ambiguity which I enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteNice Poem!
ReplyDeleteCause you deserve it... YOU HAVE
ReplyDeleteAn award for you at my site today!
Wow, this was a haunting one...
ReplyDeleteunassuming dark and damp. hats off.
ReplyDeletebeautiful picture match to a haunting story...
ReplyDeleteVery deeply sad and haunting... both the words and that reality.
ReplyDeleteNevine
Darkness doesnt bite it gnaws...your words gnaws, mouthful after mouthful it consumes. My hands turn cold ....when will the sunrise today??
ReplyDeletethankyou for this trip into your cave.
COL
Hi Kay - you won my Alice cards. I am going to leave my email in your comments as I don't want to draw attention to it - I have a really creepy commenter as of yesterday. It's smsanford AT lmi DOT net.
ReplyDeleteKay--I want to thank you for all the wonderful comments you leave on my blog. I really appreciate them, and I feel terrible when I am unable to reciprocate. (Literally--since I am often crunched for time--I post a blog and leave; not exactly the healthiest habit.) I apologize for not doing the same for you, but I still wanted to let you know that I truly appreciate you taking time the time to examine my blog. You certainly have beautiful skills of your own, and I am glad to have you as a blogging friend.
ReplyDeleteI would give anything if cancer had not taken the life of my wife when she was in her prime at age 42. But it happened.
ReplyDeleteThankfully we had a wonderful relationship.
Her haunting is of the loving sort.
I am a better (and more loving) man because of the almost 20 years we shared.
Haunting
ReplyDeleteThe residue of something lingering
fun with twists and turns...
ReplyDeleteJingle
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