Wednesday, June 9, 2010

Eternity



there is a place both here and beyond
where it all comes together
the world and the universe
become one
eternally tied up,
set free
the words unbroken
escaped from
centuries of captivity
released the revenge
the forgiveness
be-lovingly the secrets
of existence
distance depleted
words ravelled
as the pen lay to rest
the soul ever more

14 comments:

  1. Looks like the moving finger writ...

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  2. I long to visit that place.

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  3. why aren't we living there all the time..:) love that one..

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  4. "A place both her and beyond" is a great concept. If only more could see it the same way. The words are great.

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  5. that's were i'd like to be......

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  6. loved it..felt as if i m in a place i had been longing for

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  7. I think we all strive for this place either here or the after life.......wonderful concept Kay.......:-) Hugs

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  8. Its marvelous :) I agree with desert rose.

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  9. Kay, if I could deplete distance, we would be having a cup of coffee across a small table in a run down dive on a no name street and discussing this poem.

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  10. The mind is a universe where we create our world

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  11. and what should I do, to be a part of that world

    divine words...

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