Friday, June 11, 2010

Infidelity




sweat
blood
pumping through veins
knowingly rising
in dissolution
again and again
self-purgatory rains
pouring within
thump-thump-thump-thump
masochist of sorts
anxiety perused
returning to avail,
no pity for the
self-sacrificing soul
laid limply beneath defeat
exhausted, alone
in the midnight error
of bliss

21 comments:

  1. until the next morning when even the sunlight seems cold...nice write!

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  2. I love "the midnight error". That is powerful.

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  3. Wiil you still love me tomorrow....yup this is another great one my friend......:-)Hugs

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  4. oh yeah.. primal urges are very difficult to cool in the heat of any moment you have that itch. Regret is a shamefull thing even though it was fun.

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  5. The taboo can add to the thrill - right or wrong.

    PG

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  6. Very good. Liked the self- purgatory rains. No one wins...

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  7. passionate even the wrongs have their own rights..NOTHING is definite..the truth is ours to see..:) love that piece..:)BRAVO!

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  8. oooo but that 'what have I done feeling' is never worth it...

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  9. Temptation - so hard to resist, yet it always turns out badly. Well put!

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  10. Awesome write, Kay. Just awesome. Blessings!

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  11. strong deep expressions...."no pity for the
    self-sacrificing soul"

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  12. You nailed the feelings...... one's bliss is another's pain.

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  13. Oh well. A girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do, yeah?

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  14. Nailed it. Midnight error of bliss! Thump thump thump.

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  15. I had posting comment problems here yesterday, too! Blogger is a pest... He's definitely a ship that passes in the night...

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  16. wow. this is amazing.
    so raw, i love it.

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  17. "Midnight error of bliss" - BAM!

    Thanks for doing what you do Kay... and thanks for stopping by now and again. Powerful work.

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