desire to love, be loved
hold tight the encompassing
moon of fate
lying nude under beckoning angst
raptured in comforting arms
holding tight
lovers abode
shadows weep window trace
coolness drifting along
heated bodies embraced
sleep easy rest
Dreaming haze
passionate, forsaken
rising sun, transfixed light
she turns to the lover
not of hearts' pine
eyes closed
muted
lovers entwine
mourning kiss of dew
"Lying nude under beckoning angst." That's truly special. Marvelous writing.
ReplyDeleteSad...wishing to be elsewhere, caught in the reality. Hope this is not you. Don't know if I have any more heartache left to share today. It's really a beautiful piece.
ReplyDeleteA profound poem. Bitter-sweet!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteLove your poem. And thanks for your comment on my 55.
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Very well written...it was beautiful
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem, easy to get lost in.
ReplyDeleteSuch a wonderful place to be entwined with the one we love, we desire only to awake and have to change postitions and move away....:-) Hugs
ReplyDeletewhew. who is it we see behind our closed eyes in raptures embrace. haunting poem. beautiful words. well played kay.
ReplyDeletewonderful writing
ReplyDeletethis is surely one of the best you've written... i trailed along on visions outstanding!
ReplyDeleteWordless beauty.
ReplyDeletePwetty.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, Kay. You have done it again...simply, beautiful. I love your words and the picture that goes with it too...Perfect!
ReplyDeleteHope you are having a Fabulous and Fun Weekend!
xox
Kelly
PS: I have been off the blog so it took me a while to get over here :( I missed you!! I'm glad to be back to catch up :D
What an old fashion word for a title - Doxy? Shades of Dickens... Like the photo that went with it though.
ReplyDeleteKay,
ReplyDeleteMany emotions and imageries in one poem... so beautiful!!
-Alex
Beautiful!! That's all I can say!!
ReplyDeleteAnd yeah, keep 'em coming! :D
'shadows weep window trace' I am loving those words, you. Loving them.
ReplyDeleteKay, loved the flow of this, even if it was filled with longing for another. (and i want to whisper, go to the otherrrr...)
ReplyDeleteThis poem is exceptional. It is definitely one of my favorite poems of yours that I've read.
ReplyDeleteSIGH!!! Passion! Sensual!, wanting, graving, longing, for another.. R U seeing my dreams LOL
ReplyDeleteI love the title. Doxy.. being a mistress ,lover, SOUNDS inviting
You are so GOOD!!!
HUGS and SMILES
Kay, thanks for your kind words yesterday left on my blog. They really mean a lot to me. Thanks again. Hugs across the pond
ReplyDeleteo sweet lord!! awesome!!:)!
ReplyDeleteBooootiful!! I have added you to my reading list now as I kept missing you ... So get updating girl! ;0)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful vision of comfort.
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