Friday, September 18, 2009

Doxy



desire to love, be loved
hold tight the encompassing
moon of fate
lying nude under beckoning angst
raptured in comforting arms
holding tight
lovers abode
shadows weep window trace
coolness drifting along
heated bodies embraced
sleep easy rest
Dreaming haze
passionate, forsaken
rising sun, transfixed light
she turns to the lover
not of hearts' pine
eyes closed
muted
lovers entwine
mourning kiss of dew

25 comments:

  1. "Lying nude under beckoning angst." That's truly special. Marvelous writing.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Sad...wishing to be elsewhere, caught in the reality. Hope this is not you. Don't know if I have any more heartache left to share today. It's really a beautiful piece.

    ReplyDelete
  3. A profound poem. Bitter-sweet!

    ReplyDelete
  4. Love your poem. And thanks for your comment on my 55.

    PG

    ReplyDelete
  5. Very well written...it was beautiful

    ReplyDelete
  6. Wonderful poem, easy to get lost in.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Such a wonderful place to be entwined with the one we love, we desire only to awake and have to change postitions and move away....:-) Hugs

    ReplyDelete
  8. whew. who is it we see behind our closed eyes in raptures embrace. haunting poem. beautiful words. well played kay.

    ReplyDelete
  9. this is surely one of the best you've written... i trailed along on visions outstanding!

    ReplyDelete
  10. This is beautiful, Kay. You have done it again...simply, beautiful. I love your words and the picture that goes with it too...Perfect!

    Hope you are having a Fabulous and Fun Weekend!

    xox

    Kelly

    PS: I have been off the blog so it took me a while to get over here :( I missed you!! I'm glad to be back to catch up :D

    ReplyDelete
  11. What an old fashion word for a title - Doxy? Shades of Dickens... Like the photo that went with it though.

    ReplyDelete
  12. Kay,
    Many emotions and imageries in one poem... so beautiful!!
    -Alex

    ReplyDelete
  13. Beautiful!! That's all I can say!!
















    And yeah, keep 'em coming! :D

    ReplyDelete
  14. 'shadows weep window trace' I am loving those words, you. Loving them.

    ReplyDelete
  15. Kay, loved the flow of this, even if it was filled with longing for another. (and i want to whisper, go to the otherrrr...)

    ReplyDelete
  16. This poem is exceptional. It is definitely one of my favorite poems of yours that I've read.

    ReplyDelete
  17. SIGH!!! Passion! Sensual!, wanting, graving, longing, for another.. R U seeing my dreams LOL

    I love the title. Doxy.. being a mistress ,lover, SOUNDS inviting

    You are so GOOD!!!

    HUGS and SMILES

    ReplyDelete
  18. Kay, thanks for your kind words yesterday left on my blog. They really mean a lot to me. Thanks again. Hugs across the pond

    ReplyDelete
  19. Booootiful!! I have added you to my reading list now as I kept missing you ... So get updating girl! ;0)

    ReplyDelete