Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Beginning of the End

God opens the door,
"Hey, girl, what took you so long?"
I look into her bemused eyes,
grinning and shaking my head, I say,
"Oh, Lord, you have really screwed it up this time"
She chuckles, wraps her arm around my shoulder,
guiding me in,
"Come and sit, tell me all about it"

With lattes and biscottis, we sit cross legged in the garden
and I begin....

22 comments:

  1. WOW!!! better than Adam and Eve, love the photo, I sit sneaking a latte and biscottis , awaiting the next page.. SMILES

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  2. I've heard that She's a very cool chick. Love this!

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  3. You have such a lovely way with words, expressing yourself openly and freely and I love how "she" welcomed you.....:-) Hugs

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  4. ha. love it. can i get a mocha? or better yet, any cuban coffee?

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  5. haha...love the twist! Funny!

    xoxo,
    Micaela

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  6. if only. nice done. bravo and why not?

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  7. We have so much to talk about...

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  8. a refreshing new take on the whole part......wonderfully done! delightful, to say da least! :)

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  9. Kay,
    If that's the end - it is something to look forward to... If I got it correctly your God is a "she"... very interesting view!
    -Alex

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  10. this is a beautiful beginning - love to hear more - lovely lovely

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  11. Lovely!
    I'll get my double espresso okie...
    ;)

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  12. Have a wonderful weekend Kay, xv.

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  13. More believable than Adam and Eve, actually.

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  14. Excellent! ... I'm sitting here with my cup of joe -- can I listen in? ;)

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  15. Wow. This is fantastic. Yes. I would love to be sitting there with you.

    Kay, thank you so much for following my blog.. I was in a somewhat dark place and seeing you there with your comments really helped me. I am so much better now....And finally will be roving around and reading... I so enjoy your poems. They make me realize we are all in this world together. :)

    xxoo

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  16. Love it! It is so descriptive and brought a little smile to my face.

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  17. Kay, I am new to your blog, and had a tough time grasping your thoughts and I should say, you are one deep thinker.

    This post is very unique in the way I see it, lets, its the sequel to the Adam and Eve story, great work!

    Keep Going.
    Cheers!

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