I sleep
But would not know it
Minds activity
Conjuring
reality into a new format
But would not know it
Minds activity
Conjuring
reality into a new format
You ravish the insights
of my subconscious
Meeting me there
in a dreamy haze
You smile
Blowing kisses into
my golden hair
Soft petals in the breeze
brushing against our cheeks
Whirlwind of delight
sweeping us off our feet
We drift on silver rimmed clouds
through enchanted kingdoms
Embracing each other
for the dance
of our hearts flutter
Enraptured
we become one
Man and Woman
Lover
Soundly sleeping,
I reach for your hand
Longing
Floating free, light as a feather in the wind
ReplyDeleteLovely! I am not find the right word to describe my feeling while reading this one. It is so very well written!!! Keep them coming!!!
ReplyDeleteIt is amazing what sensuality and tenderness can be evoked with the use of such simplicity of language.
ReplyDeleteWhew!
i hope i ll dream like this tonight....
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful expression of a love dance between two lovers that you have given us. So nice. The feelings it evokes are indeed, moving and dream-like....I want to live a dream like this :)
ReplyDeleteHave a Beautiful Day, Kay!
Thank you for your words :)
Kay, with ym English being so limited I am so grateful for Barry as his words describes my feelings best. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your kind comments. I dont certainly see myself as a strong person right now. Not sure if I ever have been. Facing reality means to quit smoking is a distraction of the rather bigger porblems I am not able to face yet. Hug across the pond. paula
how i love dreams that end like that.... beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI want that dream...
ReplyDeleteReturned to re-read your poem. Hope you are being ok.
ReplyDeletegreat post.. tender gentle and flowing with each breath..
ReplyDeletethat was just beautiful.
ReplyDeleteJust wanted to say thanks for following me!
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