Strong, independent woman
She walks with herself
on the tightrope of life
Cautious of
the conformity within
Etching her way
to create her own
Stubbornly consoled
in the ease of a solitary being
She vows to take the struggles alone
Frustrations jump to greet her
staring her down
facing these new challenges
She is told she needs someone with her
Fear awakens within her soul
Too tenacious to ask
for the help of another
Her biggest fault
To the untrained eye
Her pride
Substance of life
holding no threat to the mind’s
resistance
The biggest battle
coming from within
It will meet her in the end
as the greatest challenge
To succeed
Her pride must never win
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I like it. You've got talent! --C. Taylor Brown http://chriswasbrown.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteA very optimistic and strong message here. Loved it. Keep writing!!!
ReplyDeletemmm, asking for help IS my biggest fault. damn that independent streak!!!!!
ReplyDeletebattles from within !! damm those battles.. FABULOUS!!!
ReplyDeleteI relate to this one all too well.
ReplyDeletevery well written, and I agree with C. Taylor Brown, you have a tremendous talent!
Never nice.
ReplyDeleteAs you walk along with outstretched arms you never know what or who you may touch to stay balanced.
There is much to be said for pride, because it is the first cousin of confidence.
ReplyDeleteThere is nothing wrong with pride as long as it is not coupled with arrogance. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeletehere from Davids POTD
Nicely done .. and congrats on the POTD mention!
ReplyDeleteIt motivates us to strive and achieve, doesn't it? Profound thoughts here! Brilliant! Congrats on your POTD! ~Janine XO
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