Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Numbness


Numbness
Inability to move
Thoughts of activity
Numbness
Mourning
What?
Unattainable dreams
One foot
In front of the other
Movement
Into numbness
Here
Than there
Numbness
Stranger on the street
Numb
Immobile
Stop
For a moment
Breath
Move
Forward
Onward
Numbness
Be

6 comments:

  1. Hmmm? The last three months of my life caught in one poem.

    Amazing.

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  2. Nice. The meter drums the mood. Quite clever, actually.

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  3. you have expressed numbness extremely well here.

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  4. Kay, I feel it, the numbness. Very powerful! The picture is perfect too!

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  5. A nice illustration of the word - numb. Keep writing!!!

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